Walking the Line






Ahh...romantic suspense is a tight rope! If your villain is too obvious, your reader isn't happy. If they come out of left field, your reader isn't happy. So you have to find that sweet spot in between. Only thing is, the sweet spot shifts depending on the reader.


I'm going to be upfront with you--not everyone likes every one of my books. Gasp! The horror! I received a five star review this week and a three star review, on the same book. Reading through my reviews I find that one reader said the book kept them on edge, while another reader said it wasn't the nail-biter they were looking for, because they figured out who the killer was early on. One reader said the characters felt very real, another said the opposite. Love the romance, didn't feel the connection between characters. Arghhh! It's enough to drive a poor author crazy! And it's not that one reader doesn't like all of the aspects, like they are a Negative Nelly. One who likes the suspense line, doesn't like the romance. One who likes the romance, doesn't like the suspense.



What I do pride myself in, though, is most of my "bad" reviews still say something like, all-in-all, though, it was an enjoyable read, or, despite missing this or that, it was well-written and the characters were well-developed. It's funny, as an author, to hear different fans say what their favorite book of mine is. One will gush over BLACKOUT, but for another, their favorite is ABANDON ALL HOPE. It's just interesting what the reader brings to the book, and takes out of the book. One example is the three star review I got today was from a reviewer that gave me a five star review on another book a few days ago. She admitted to comparing the two, and they are just way different. BLACKOUT is a contemporary romance with a lot of deep emotion and angst. BETWEEN ROCK AND A HARD PLACE is a romantic suspense, and while it deals with some tough issues, the focus is on the relationship and the case. So you have to ask yourself, what book preceded mine? Where was the reader coming from, what was happening in their lives that might color their perception of your book.



As an author, then, it's hard sometimes to tell what you are doing right, and what your are doing wrong. You have to listen hard to the feedback and if you see something consistent in what readers/reviewers are saying, then you need to take a closer look at that.



For instance, I've had several readers say that my heroine in BETWEEN ROCK AND A HARD PLACE is weak or immature. I want to say, yes, she is. She lost her parents at a young age in a plane crash SHE walked away from. Since that time she has been totally controlled by an overbearing uncle. She hasn't had room to grow, and she is only twenty-four. Know any immature twenty-four-year-olds? That being said, I missed the mark somewhere along the line by not emphasizing these things to my readers. (Again, you walk a hard line with what to tell your readers. Some will say, don't spoon feed things to your readers, they'll get it. Others will say, you have to hit them over the head.)




I also get some flack about my rock stars not being mobbed every place they go. I've written blogs about this before, but I will contend that if you are a star and want to keep under the radar, you can. Sure paparazzi hound certain stars, but have you seen how some stars manage to keep out of the headlines? I understand that readers of this genre normally see a huge emphasis on the star aspect of it. I focus more on the relationship angle. Does that mean I can't throw a little more harassment my rock stars' way? Absolutely not. Readers sometimes want what they are familiar with, what has been presented to them by others as "the life of a rock star." They want their books to be realistic, but their "reality" may be defined by stereotypes. However, although rock stars' lives vary as much as yours and mine do, there are some things they share in common. And if my fictional rock stars are making choices to avoid the media attention, (for instance, wearing disguises, eating at off times, avoiding public areas, all of which my rock stars do) then maybe I need to emphasize that more. (But don't bang them over the head. Got it.)



In some ways, that is what I like about this line of work. If you take it seriously, you are always learning more about your trade, so there are new challenges in every day, in every project. Well, I've talked long enough. I'd love to hear some of your thoughts on the subject. Authors, do you contend with some of the same issues? Or does everyone love all of your books? [If this is true, I don't want to hear it! ;) ] Readers, are there certain things that authors do that really drive you nuts? Have you ever known that a book you read hit you the wrong way, but not because of the strength of the book itself but because of something going on in your life? Please leave a comment, and if I get some good interaction going on I'll give away an e-copy of BETWEEN ROCK AND A HARD PLACE, so you can judge for yourself.



Thanks for reading!


Now, I've got this song running through my head, and I'm going to get it stuck in yours, too, if you dare to click below! ;) 
(What is up with me posting all these country songs lately? I swear I'm a rock girl!)








Okay, just to balance things out, I need to throw a little Ricky Nelson at ya that has to do with the subject, too. Enjoy and have a nice weekend!











15 comments:

  1. Most of my reviews have been positive, for which I'm eternally grateful, though one three star reviewer went on to say she really liked the book. Hmmm. In one of my books, the war veteran hero tried to conceal his PTSD. He suffered from flashbacks he endured and kept to himself. A reviewer mentioned his angry outbursts and rants. Honestly, there were none. But I must have done something wrong to give one reader that impression. The beauty of writing is to each his own. Different tastes and different conclusions, I suppose.

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    1. Agreed. I tend to think the ones with the highest praise are the ones who are right. ;)
      It's aggravating when someone doesn't understand your characters, but the flip side, when someone really gets your characters, is so rewarding! Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Margo!

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  2. Great post, M.J. And it's not just readers who interpret your characters differently. I have a new editor on a manuscript who has a completely opposite interpretation of the main characters than the first editor. I'm having to undo changes made for the first version and face the daunting task of implementing the new version. It feels like my original story is getting lost in the tug-of-war. I want to scream, "You can't please all the people all of the time!"

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    1. Wow, that's got to be hard to keep all the plot lines and subplots and clues and character traits straight!

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    2. Ooh, Marissa! I sympathize! I had an editor that loved my manuscript, but suggested a few changes and then had to leave the publishing house because of family issues which left me with a different editor who wanted me to change stuff back.Can be very frustrating. Reminds me of my first day as a lunch lady. One of my co-workers walked by where I was cupping up cobbler and said, "That's not enough." She walked out of the kitchen and another co-worker walked by, before I'd made any changes, and said, "That's too much." Ha! Cracks me up.

      But your situation is definitely not funny. And I've also had editors, that like you said, changed things around so much stylistically that I felt my voice was lost. I get ya! I hope it all works out soon and the book comes out stronger in the long run. Thanks for coming by!

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  3. You can learn a lot from reviews. But you have to take them with a grain of salt (or maybe valium). :-) I've gotten a less-than-stellar review for a book that didn't cover a topic the reader wanted. So you can't please every reader every time. Look at reviews for books that have sold in the millions, like Diana Gabaldon's Outlander series. The differences in opinion are all over the board--from best book ever to could not finish. I think it's those differences that make the world interesting. How boring it would be if we all liked the same thing, every time! Still, you have to develop a thick skin to read the negative commentary, no matter how helpful it might be!

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    1. Right on the money, Leah! You prefer vanilla, I prefer chocolate. It's all good. But it is also valuable to take the whole of your reviews and see what you might have missed getting across. Sometimes it's in our head, we just haven't put it down on paper. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and have a great rest of your weekend!

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  4. I do try to take the reviews as serious critiques, but when a "reader" gave me a 2 because her Kindle stopped working early in my book...Well...not much to go on there! Thanks for a meaningful post.

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    1. Darn, Susan. You need to get on that Kindle, girl! ;)
      I appreciate you stopping by today.
      Have a fabulous week!

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  5. Some readers have had issues with my heroine's teenage daughter in Every Move She Makes. She's a total pain in the butt rebel who acts out. Some readers love that she's a "real" teen with issues. Others get in a huff and say they couldn't stand her and would never let a kid of theirs get away with that stuff, blah, blah, blah. Of course most of those readers admit they don't actually have kids...but I digress. My point is, some readers just want flowers and sunshine all the time. My editor wanted me to change the daughter to be sweet and slap a big pink bow in her hair instead of a tattoo. Other readers appreciate how hard she is for the heroine to deal with. But, you're right. Anything controversial will stir up strong opinions. Some will like it, and some won't. You definitely can't please everyone! Great post. Sorry I'm late to the party, but I was driving all day yesterday!

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    1. Hey, glad you could join us at any time! I read every move she makes and found her to be realistic. Sure you wanted to choke her at times, but she's a TEENAGER. That's what they drive you to! (I'm sure they feel the same way about us!) Thank you for joining in our conversation today!

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  6. All a writer can do is please herself/himself. Unless, of course, you have an editor. You just try your best.

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    1. Yep! We're all different, so of course we like different things. Some one who is a bit edgy themselves would not like a sweet character. That would drive them crazy. But someone who is mild mannered might be appalled by a character with a biting sense of humor. I'm so glad you could pop in, Diane. Thanks for coming by.

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  7. That's the fascinating thing about being a writer. I like to think if I please myself, I've done my job. Some will like and some will not like what pleases me, but at least, I am happy! Good luck with all your projects.

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    1. Agreed. Sometimes pleasing yourself is the hardest part of all, if you're a perfectionist. And thank you, Susan, for stopping by!

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